m‌‍‍‍‌‍‍‌‌‍‍‍‌‍‍‍‍‌‍‍y dear writer ,my writer is 218210, revision just dissertation chapter 1-2-3 is done my writer is 218210, I shared with writing center my paper with university for proofread, they have fixed all style ,language ,format. Professor. have comment for paper missing and weakness.some part have to be update paper with command feedback ? there are 2 attachment 1 feedback and missing showing? 2 clean paper (paper is done ) please you need edit all part clean attachment ,after your update all feedback i will give check paper. please highlighted your worked on paper is clean paper for easy to finalize paper. Dear Vefa, It was a pleasure working with your content. I have attached two versions of the edited material: a “marked-up” file with our revisions and comments displayed for review purposes, and a “clean” file. Please be sure to review the changes in the “marked-up” document, as the editor may have provided suggestions or made notes on issues that require your attention. Your editor also provided the following note for you: Hello Vefa, Thank you for allowing me to edit your work! You have chosen a worthwhile topic, and I hope you obtain some interesting and useful results. The writing was generally clear, and many of the changes I made were to improve consistency and agreement with APA style. I did notice some structural problems, mainly in the balance of materi‌‍‍‍‌‍‍‌‌‍‍‍‌‍‍‍‍‌‍‍al between Chapters I and II. See my comments in the marked-up version for more details. The only part of the proposal that seemed really weak to me was the Triangulation section of Chapter III: I believe this needs more work. See my comments in the marked-up version for more. I formatted all your citations and references. The reference list contained many duplicate entries, which I consolidated. Some entries in the reference list were missing elements. I inserted templates for all missing items along with specific comments in the marked-up version explaining what you need to supply from your sources. I commented on other matters throughout the marked-up version. Good luck as you continue working, and stay safe and well! Furthermore, if you make any changes to the “clean” document that you would like us to review, please be sure to turn “tracked changes on” or otherwise highlight any new material you add to the “clean” document so that our editors can find it quickly and easily. This will also enable us to follow up editing requests for the new material only and for editing the entire document again. It was a pleasure working with you and your material. We are absolutely committed to providing you with a technically polished document free of objective mechanical and stylistic errors. So, should you find any errors in our work, please immediately let us know, so that we can make corrections promptly‌‍‍‍‌‍‍‌‌‍‍‍‌‍‍‍‍‌‍‍.